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Literature >> Poem >> "Entering A New World" By Subrath Shrestha
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(Mr. Shrestha is a postgraduate student at Bridgeport. -Ed.)
The first thing I felt
When I left my land
That I knew for years
World is big and beautiful
And I stand a chance
To explore and live in this beautiful world
I’d a notion of luck
Thanking for gods gratefulness
Now, I live in a land
That I only heard of
That I only dreamed
I know nothing better here
But I have vibes
That I will make history proud of me
Being a legend in mankind
It’s what my instinct says
It’s what my intuition says
Believe me!
I did not travel so long
To hurt my instincts and intuition
I did not travel so long
Just to be stupid dumb
I’m here with a task
So that world remembers me for eternal!
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Tuesday, November 18, 2003
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Thanks for pointing out the typo. The correction has been made.
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devcored
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do it.
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Subrath Shrestha
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Saturday, November 08, 2003
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Hi Suman,
That was not my grammar mistake. Perhaps it was a typing error. By the way your spelling for grammar is incorrect you wrote "grammer". However, I understand that must have been your typing mistake too. So, what I am trying to say is please don't be so harsh to someone by saying "very childish write" if you find a typing error. There are chances our fingers can slip when we type . Thank you for your comment.
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Suman Thapa
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Friday, November 07, 2003
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The first thing I felt
When I left the my land
When I left THE my land. Please learn grammer before u write poems. This is a very childish write.
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